Character Designs : faux-Alan Wake game concept

Serial killer obsessed with Wake and his works, driven to kill due to being a social outcast in a collapsing town. Found solace in the spirit of Bishop and Wake’s books. Wears her fathers military clothing and a large knife. I want them to feel real, distinct but like you could walk past them in the street – some real life horror in the fact they’re so normal and not exaggerated. A lot of my inspiration is coming from Far Cry’s villains as they hold, punctuate and sell the games their part of but feel like real people.
I wanted to create an ally npc and I settled on a retiring mounted police man, using the real world Massachusetts uniform as inspiration. I wanted him to feel real so I've made him a biker fanatic who had been pulled back to do the job after he was at a biking festival or similar, so he’ll still be in his leather, biker jacket.